These are the most common type of message for memos or emails. This example generally follows a direct organizational pattern:
Following is a minute sheet that involves a statement of information followed by a request. Both the organizational pattern and the style of the minute suggest that the writer did not expect any opposition from the primary reader.
MINUTE SHEET
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Ms. A. Kimbar (HR/OPS)
Ms. M. Tremblay |
Ms. F. Lacroix (HR/OPS)
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Language training costs for Marie Tremblay |
The subject line gives a clear indication of the subject matter of the minute |
- Integration supports Ms. Marie Tremblay’s application to follow English language training and therefore requests that payment be covered by both Integration and HRD.
- The training is to take place in Manchester with the International House School for a period of three weeks. Suitable dates are from 9 to 29 October 2005.
- The school's on-line assessment has been completed and the course recommended is "Intensive English plus 1 to 1". I have attached the original invoice from International House indicating total costs of £1,918 (or US$ 3,383) for expenses including training, accommodation and registration fee. Ms. Tremblay agrees to pay for her own travel expenses.
- Integration therefore agrees to pay US$783 of this amount and requests HRD's financial support for the remaining US$2,600.
- Many thanks for your assistance in this matter.
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The opening sentence makes the purpose for writing the memo clear.
Each paragraph is reasonably well constructed.
The flow of the memo is good; each paragraph flows out of the one before it.
The action required is clear, specific and reinforced in the end of the message. |
03.10.05
Martha Sisley
INTEGRATION |
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