Use parallel structure to improve the following extracts.
Example 1
In all its activities, the ILO observes the following principles:
addressing the needs of the most vulnerable groups;
the respect of human rights;
paying close attention to gender concerns;
applying wherever possible safe and healthy working conditions; and
peace building efforts in the areas also affected by political conflict should be promoted.
In all its activities, the ILO observes the following principles:
addressing the needs of the most vulnerable groups;
respecting human rights;
paying close attention to gender concerns;
applying wherever possible, safe and healthy working conditions; and
promoting peace building in the areas also affected by political conflict.
Example 2
I am enclosing both the interim narrative and financial reports respectively for March together, along with a mission report about last month’s trip to Thailand. As well, for April I have enclosed a detailed expenditure report.
I am enclosing the following reports:
interim narrative and financial reports for March;
a detailed expenditure report for April;
a mission report about last month’s trip to Thailand.
Example 3
She is fast, efficient and a supervisor of great effectiveness.
She is a fast, efficient and effective supervisor.