More Practice with Parallelism

The e-mail message available below contains several problems with parallelism. Revise the e-mail, and then check your response against the suggested response. Your proposed solutions may differ, but you should find at least eight mistakes in the original. Remember, parallelism applies to verbs, nouns, phrases, and clauses. In every instance, elements that are similar in function should be similar in form.

Now that you have finished practicing with parallelism, you will move on to lists and series.