Practice with Mechanics

There are several errors in the e-mail available below, including errors of punctuation, parallelism, capitalization, and word usage. Find the errors and revise the e-mail, then compare your response to the answer key.

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Parallelism practice

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Parallelism practice answer

Next, you will consider logical connectors. These connectors add a sense of flow to the correspondence you write.