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Module 2b —
Report Writing
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Model introduction

The best way to learn about writing introductions is to study examples.

Below is a short Governing Body report (HIV/AIDS and Employment) that offers some useful indicators of how a good introduction should work. Beneath the introduction, you can see the outline of the paper that follows.

Introduction

1. The impact of HIV/AIDS on labour and employment seriously threatens the fulfilment of the ILO’s goal of decent work for all. The epidemic has already caused substantial labour force losses and will, unless counteracted, continue to reduce labour force growth in many developing countries, especially in Africa. This in turn presents a major threat to sustainable development and poverty reduction. However, action by the ILO’s constituents can mitigate the economic and social effects of the epidemic and contribute to reducing HIV transmission.

2. The detrimental impact of HIV/AIDS on employment results from the effects on labour, enterprises and households, as well as on demand and investment. Of particular concern is the long-term damage to human resources through erosion of the skills base and loss of organizational capacity. In the workplace, discrimination due to HIV/AIDS is endangering rights, including income entitlements and social protection benefits.

3.The rationale for addressing HIV/AIDS in all aspects of the ILO’s work, put forward by the Director-General in 2001, is strengthened by mounting evidence of the effects of HIV on employment, as well as by evidence that the Decent Work Agenda can contribute effective responses to the epidemic.

4. This paper first outlines the primary impact of HIV/AIDS on the labour force, and then discusses the effects on enterprises, employment and job creation. It draws attention to employment strategies that can help mitigate the impact of the epidemic. The paper concludes with a review of the ILO’s work in this area and calls for consolidation of efforts to date.

 

Outline

Introduction

Labour force losses due to HIV/AIDS

The impact of HIV/AIDS on enterprises, employment and job creation

Enterprises
The informal economy
The public sector
Income and effective demand
Investment and competitiveness
Loss of jobs and effects on employment creation
Workers in high-risk situations

The role of the ILO

The introduction is short and to the point. It has flow and reads as a piece of continuous text. It clusters parts of the report in a meaningful way to reveal the structure of the report. Unlike a summary or an overview, it does not give the specific conclusions or recommendations. However, because Governing Body reports tend not to have summaries, the report in this example does provide a very brief summary within the introduction.

An introduction is a contract between you and your readers. In it, you make specific commitments that must then be fulfilled. The most important of these is your statement about the purpose or focus of your report.

So, introductions in reports have three main functions:

  • to make the purpose of the report clear;
  • to explain the scope of the report: this is sometimes expressed as Terms of Reference (TORs) in formal reports;
  • to provide the readers with a framework on which to build their understanding of the document: this is usually the last part of your introduction and serves as a transition to the body of the report.

Their lesser but still important functions are:

  • to gain the reader's attention;
  • to provide some background information;
  • to indicate the authority under which the report is written (i.e., who requested the report).

In short, your introduction should provide your readers with whatever they need to prepare them to understand the information in your report, and act on your statement of purpose.

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